Writing drunkenly vulgar poetry at Dallas on a Friday night…life is good

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2012

Well fuck me running sideways in a leather jump suit from a Heinlein novel
How many people can fit in this bar looking to forget?
Finding sex
Drowning themselves and their lives in alcohol
Drinking as if tomorrow won’t spin and land on a vicious headache and vomit un-flushed in the toilet
I suppose the best question I can ask myself is “what am I doing here with them closer to their side of the line than mine?”

Author's Notes/Comments: 

no wonder Dallas inspires such good/intense/odd/whatever you find this poem to be poems
There are so many wounded souls bleeding words into my mind here and I’ve had enough alcohol to spok them all!

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Beatnik1979's picture

delicious and profane

You have excercised your Fist Amendment to the point of its ripped muscular bulges of profanity protruding out from arm, chest, thigh, and buttock. Grotesque, bad breathed, polluted, profane imagery is a little too handsy on the side of the line we peek over on or cling to( on occaison) like edge of cliff. Enjoyable..and as expected, executed  perfectly true to your style.

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

thank you again

sometimes we all get messy no?


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Ashley

Beatnik1979's picture

Derangement of the sences worked

for Rimbaud, why not the rest of us?

running_with_rabbits's picture

don't know who that is

don't know who that is


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Ashley

Beatnik1979's picture

Arthur Rimbaud

Great French poet. A child prodigy, really. But depends on whos done the translation. One of my many inspirations :)

running_with_rabbits's picture

interesting...

can you pm me a link to some of his stuff?


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Ashley

ashes_theartofburning's picture

running_with_insanity.

WHAT?

ugh.
Your so freakishly talented it scares me sometimes!

I'm thinking "What the hell will she write next?"
Makes me look forward to your creative mind.
Let's take shots together one day and tazer the creepers that step over our dust chalked line.
Than we will write about how close they came before we shocked them back towards reality.
-.^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) can I make my chalk line

:) can I make my chalk line jagged so they are confused? some spots they ca get closer but one step left and ZAP!

also thanks, you guys have to stop complimenting me so perfectly, it leaves me speechless


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Ashley

Beavis's picture

Whoa!

I just had another flashback! Great write ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

Beavis do you spend your time

Beavis do you spend your time off getting drunk looking for random sex at the bar? tisk tisk


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Ashley

Fitzgerald's picture

I love your writing style.

I love your writing style. You put it all out there. Excellent writing!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks (I am blushing for

:) thanks (I am blushing for real right now)


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Ashley

Fitzgerald's picture

Well good lol I meant what I

Well good lol I meant what I said.

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

:)


Much Love

Ashley