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A LOSER
I am a loser.
I am nobody.
I am invisible.
I am insignificant.
I am the fly on your wall.
I am the rug you walk all over.
I am the pictures that fall
Off your shelf,
And break.
I am a weirdo.
I am a freak,
But i am exactly
All you wish you could be...
Because i am me,
And i am free. And i can be
Anything
That i want to be.
Hi again! Thanks for critiquing my poems, I was feeling down and it brightened my day. I like this. I like the way you used the form of your poem to demonstrate your ideas. That's clever. See you!
~Kate~
This is a wonderful poem. I hate conformity especially when it is plain to see that a person is only trying to be a part of the 'crowd'. To be true to oneself is the most important thing in life, that understanding leads to the ability to become all you are meant to be.
This poem also flows nicely. Great job, thanks for sharing.
Take care and write on!
Denise H.