girl

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notes in my phone

numb girl.

dumb girl.

never any fun girl.

always on the run girl.

never has enough.

 

loud girl.

proud girl.

doesn't come around girl.

'look at what you've found, girl."

doesn't make a sound.

 

shy girl.

high girl.

trying not to cry girl.

wont look you in the eye girl.

makes you wanna die.

 

blue girl.

"true, girl."

wanting something new girl.

sitting by the pool girl.

will always play the fool.

 

mad girl.

sad girl.

trying to be bad girl.

never acting glad girl.

took everything you had.

 

weak girl.

meek girl.

walking in the street girl.

doesn't need to eat girl.

her presence is a treat.

 

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Beatnik1979's picture

Well done

This could easily be a hit single.

  A very light, very playful melodic structure. 

 

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

Love this!! Can't really

Love this!! Can't really explain why- great rhythm and very well written!!


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

Spinoza's picture

This one cascades like a

This one cascades like a waterfall of fun.