Don't You

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Don't you think
I deserve more
Than what you give
And ignore
Don't you know
I need more
Than what you've shown
To me before
Don't you see
I'm falling down
I fight to pull
Myself back around


But I feel so alone
Whenever you're here
I've gained a new
Feeling of fear
You've given me
Every reason
To believe
That you are fake
And oh so cold
I feel alone
Even with you around
I feel like I'm fighting
To get off the ground
I'm fallen now
I cannot rise
Above this world
And above this life
You pull me down
And make me believe
That you are the one
Who really sees
The truth is this
There's nothing real
Nothing from you
I can ever feel

Don't you think
I deserve more
Than what you give
And ignore
Don't you know
I need more
Than what you've shown
To me before
Don't you see
I'm falling down
Fighting to pull
Myself around


I can't feel it with you
What I felt before
The love I felt
Can't feel anymore
I'm lost in my zone
With you around
I feel so alone
I need to release
I can't hold on
And you can't see
All that you do
Is beating me
It's breaking my heart
And tearing my soul
Because you have now
Become so cold


Don't you think
I deserve more
Than what you give
And what you ignore
Don't you know
I need more
Than what you've shown
To me before
Don't you see
That I'm falling away
I'm losing my sight
Can't pull away


I'm falling further
Don't you see
Can't take this any longer
Don't you
Don't you know
You are my reason
My reason to be
Alone in this world
Loneliness
Is all you give
You take from me
You take to live
Nothing can please
Someone like you
Nothing can change
All that you do
There is no reason
To fight anymore
I'm giving up
It's time to ignore
The feelings I hold
That I can't feel
It's time for me
To find something real


Don't you think
I deserve more
Than what you give
And ignore
Don't you know
I need more
Than what you've shown
To me before
Don't you see
I've fallen down
Can't fight to pull
Myself from the ground


Don't you know
Can't you see
What you don't feel
Is inside me
Don't you
Don't you
Don't you see
Don't you know
What I believe
Don't you say
That you have been there
Don't you try
And act like you care
Now that I leave
You try to share
What you used to hide
It can't compare
I've lost it now
Don't you see
That I can't live
If you're with me
Now I leave
You here all alone
So you can feel
What you've shown
Don't you
Don't you
Don't you try
And care right now
Don't you think
You can win
Don't you try
Try to see
Don't you know
It's time to leave
Don't you see
Can't take this any longer
Don't you
Don't you know
You are my reason
My reason to be
Alone in this world
Loneliness
Is all you give
You take from me
You take to live

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Also needs refining...

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nightlight1220's picture

Serendipity

Let me tell you something Mr. 'Give Me Some More',

 

You may think you can woo a girl through a window, or locked door,

 

But your planned out facades with your heart smothered in rhyme,

 

Has become boring and shallow, withered and old with time,

 

Speaking in riddles, any fool can do,

 

Why So Serious?, are you thinking I'm figuring your act ain't so cool?

 

All your words have no meaning--- you're mask now revealed,

 

All the ways you deceive using innocents to conceal

 

Oh, don't get me wrong, the love letters are great,

 

But your signatures lack something--

 

So you've now sealed your fate,

 

I'll be here forever and ever...cause I truly anticipate,

 

That final hurrah where your soul meets the gate,

 

And your words can be piled up onto a new checkered slate,

 

All your blubbering nonsense for me, was no fun,

 

Interfering with so many can never be undone,

 

But whisper your bullshit some more my third wheel,

 

In the end...know what? I am GLAD that your heart I did steal.

 

 

And I'm not giving it back...gonna hang it with the other ones on my wall--!!! *sinister grin**   :-p

 

 

 

 

10:37 PM 7/8/2013


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

RoC's picture

Could you

At least make sure its in good company.
:p


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

nightlight1220's picture

what, like 'call in the

what, like 'call in the dancing girls' sort of thing? ok... bitches in drag, you mean? lol...cute, RoC.  Always sharp witted you are. <3 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

RoC's picture

I try

Like to keep people on their toes.
Shall we dance the heart scarred melody?
Or shall we seek the mending remedy?
Lest we be fools with no chemistry
Or simply lost in our memories


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

nightlight1220's picture

Or maybe everybody mind their

Or maybe everybody mind their own business and get their own life...lmao... Now that's a novel idea.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

RoC's picture

Living

In a dream world now, are we nightlight?
Everyone mind their own...that'll be the day...
Can't assimilate control
Without sticking in your nose.. ;)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

nightlight1220's picture

No I don't dream much. That's

No I don't dream much. That's why I have no need for nosiness either. Enjoy your self while you can, though, foolio. One day you won't be able to anymore. ...but me I will write to you... and keep you from the noose, and show you your true colors, obscured and obtuse....I'll twirl you furl you...yes I'm known to turn them out--- and in the end I make sure they behave like a good little boy scout.  While I dance all day long, you may dance in your dreams.... but like immigrants to America, don't be fooled---it ain't all that it seems!!!  (lmao...)

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "