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Glitter Between Lashes
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Ashes' 365 Challenge Your eyes are glimmering, glimmering
Your lips are whispering, glistening
It’s not a mystery, mystery
I see the glitter between your lashes
The fire in your eyes
I see you rising from the ashes
And staring at the sky
Your heart is missing beats, missing beats
Your soul is missing me, missing me
It’s not our history, history
I see the glitter between your lashes
The fire in your eyes
I see you rising from the ashes
And staring at the sky
I know it didn’t work, didn’t work like it should
You know I did my best, did everything I could
To keep us safe, every day, to keep us where we stood
But I was just too weak, no strength to keep us seeing what was good
Now, we’re fighting through, all the truth, we never understood
And I am chasing you, racing you, through the woods
I got lost along the way
Just couldn’t find the strength to stay
Trust that I’m sorry when I say
I never meant to change
Your eyes are shimmering, glittering
Your words are hitting me, hitting deep
It’s not a mystery, mystery
And after all this time
I’ve come to realize
That I was wrong to say goodbye
Now, I see the glitter between your lashes
The fire in your eyes
I see you rising from our ashes
And reaching for the sky
There’s a glitter between your lashes
A heart that wants to cry
I see the embers in your ashes
As you rise up to the night
Your eyes are shimmering, glimmering
Your heart is missing beats, missing me
Your lips are glistening, whispering
It’s no mystery, our history
It’s just history, no mystery
I see the glitter between your lashes
And the fire burning bright
I know I’ve turned your world to ashes
I’m trying hard to make it right
Your eyes are shimmering
Your lips are whimpering
My words are bittersweet
I see the glitter between your lashes
And the fire burning in your eyes
Your
Heart is missing beats, missing me
Such a great line, i could really tell that you got into this one.
Im quite jealous, actually, some of the rhymes and lyrics you have woven together are just fascinating and flow so well with each other. Kind of like a romeo and juliet mix with fairies. Awesome job!
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
I made the assumption
That between lashes meant between top and bottom instead of the bridge. And you know how I like to write about eyes.
I meant to write it as a love song, then when my brain weight the options of "missing me" and "listening" for the rhyme scheme, I chose to make it a lost love with a rectify theme.
Yeah, I definitely had fun with it. Can't wait to see how my brain wraps the next one up.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Nice
job of this one.
keep on!
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Tank ye tank ye
Much apperciated. Glad you enjoyed.
More coming. Just waiting for my next assignment.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Yeah, it was
A fun one. Now I wanna hear it with music.
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That'll be delayed.
I seem to have lost the musician I'd enlisted. But it will come, eventually.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
!?
Lost the musician!!?? Oh no! Hope you get that worked out!
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I think
I'll have to find a new one
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr