Candy Wrapper

I seek the treasure hidden deep
There’s a taste that’s oh so sweet
I seek what it is covering
And it’s got me wondering

What’s behind the wrapping, waiting for the night?
What’s concealed from reach and hidden in the lines?
You’ve got me hungry with an itch
You’ve wrapped my cravings within this
Candy wrapper

I yearn for just one taste to feed my sugar high
I’m ready for the chase, to find the secrets deep inside
You’ve got me craving just one bit
You’ve wrapped my hunger up in this
Candy wrapper

You have the one thing that I crave, I can see it in your eyes
You know all the steps to take, to keep me satisfied
You’ve got me yearning for a lick
You’ve trapped my hunger inside this
Candy wrapper

I want to slowly peel the layers, loosen all the ties
I want to sample every flavor, and savor what’s inside
You’ve got my heart all in a twist
You’ve got me wanting what’s in this
Candy wrapper

I long to touch, to taste, to reap
That succulence that’s oh so sweet
I seek what you’ve been covering
And it’s got me wondering
About the flavor in the layers of your candy wrapper

Allow me just one sip
To taste the sweetest bliss
Let’s unwrap the treasure hidden in
Your candy wrapper, candy wrapper

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This one was a bit challenging

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Astral_Tides's picture

Wow! Geez man, you have

Wow! Geez man, you have really taken off lately.

What a writer..

I am commenting here and on all the rest, simply staggered.

I envy the pen you carve vellums with.

What a splendor to whitness in real time.

Amazing stuff here and now, and lately, keep it rolling!!

"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.


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RoC's picture

Amazingly inspired

As of late. Par for the course with our Lady Ash.

"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

ashes_twisted's picture


I really like this, 

The rhyming made me think of that one hit wonder butterfly by crazy town. 

A very fun read, ROC, well done!

"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

RoC's picture

You're my butterfly

Sugar, baby... I remember that song
Now, my nostalgia's done kicked in

"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr