sometimes we rise
sometimes we fall
our dreams so big
sometimes so small

but still we dream
trying to fulfil them
planning our ways
our paths in the game

but it's satisfaction
 that' the most we need
desires never cease
'cos it's when we succeed

Author's Notes/Comments: 

please read my poem and i am awaiting for your comments

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demigodess's picture

this is really cool! i agree

this is really cool! i agree with it compleley :P

~Grass is green~ <^>

heatherburns35's picture


nie true....We have to keep on, keeping on...