a cool breeze blew through me
my mind yearning to be free
but something is holding me back
binding me by shackles

may be it's me myself
fearing to step out into the world
afraid to face the challenge
to come out into the sun

the outer world seems so unknown
i don't get those things out there
they puzzle me day and night
their feelings are so different

it makes me confused
so i fear that may be i'll fail
to become one of them
and be merged in the crowd

but my heart goes out there
always trying to make me go
but my mind cant make it
so i am always stick up where i was

but today my mind can't stop
i will go out today
and face this world
because it's worthy ,so


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If im any judge, its a good poem.

It seems a bit rushed though so maybe slow down a bit yes? But all in all its a decent poem.

This ones a bit like it:


Keep up the good work!

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please read my poem i wrote

please read my poem i wrote it just now on the spot .i am awiting of all of your comments