new year

look into my eyes

 

can u see the bygone past

 

deep in my iris

 

can u feel things that hurts

 

leaving apart

 

the loses of the year

 

Looking forward

 

For the times ahead of us

 

 

 

Its time that we celebrate

 

Prepare ourselves to start

 

Cause coming in it’s way

 

Is the first day of the year

 

 

 

Failing in our errands

 

When we felt so lonely

 

Deep in sorrow & pain

 

Losing our hopes slowly

 

Sometimes crying out in pain

 

Sometimes we laugh

 

Realizing that falling

 

Is a part of picking urself up

 

 

 

Its time that we celebrate

 

Prepare ourselves to start

 

Cause coming in it’s way

 

Is the first day of the year

 

 

 

Coming out of deep darkness

 

Enlightened by new light

 

Awakening and reviving

 

All will be right

 

Look about urself aroud u

 

This world is pleased and smiling

 

In it’s new vigour and color

 

End of one year is just the beginning

 

 

 

Its time that we celebrate

 

Prepare ourselves to start

 

Cause coming in it’s way

 

Is the first day of the year

Author's Notes/Comments: 

please tell me how was my poem.i am new in this site.

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a few english problems, but i

a few english problems, but i actually really like this poem. i wrote a new years poem to, leave a comment if you've got the time

-Brandon