labyrinth

say it's the same sun spinning in the same sky

say it's the same stars streaming in the same night

tell me it's the same world whirling through the same space

tell me it's the same time tripping through the same day

so say it's the same house and nothing in the house has changed

yeah say it's the same room and nothing in the room is strange

oh tell me it's the same boy burning in the same bed

tell me it's the same blood breaking in the same head

say it's the same taste taking down the same kiss

say it's the same you

say it's the same you and it's always been like this

say it's the same you

say it's the same you and it always and forever is

say it's the same you

say it's the same you and it's always been like this

say it's the same you

say it's the same you and it always and forever is

say it's the same you

say it's the same you

yeah tell me it's all the same

this is how it's always been

but if nothing has changed...

then it must mean...

but the sun is cold - the sky is wrong

the stars are black - the night is gone

the world is still - the space is stopped

the time is out - the day is dropped

the house is dark - the room is scarred

the boy is stiff - the bed is hard

the blood is thick - the head is burst

the taste is dry - the kiss is thirst

and it's not the same you

it's not the same you

no it never was like this

it's not the same you

it's not the same you and it never really is

it's not the same you

it's not the same you

no it never was like this

it's not the same you

it's not the same you and it never really is

it's not the same you

it's not the same you

oh it's not the same

this isn't how it's always been

everything has to have changed...

or it's me...

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Charles Smith's picture

Look, I get that you're proud that you just learned about repetition as poetic device, but you've taken it to it's absurd conclusion. This would have made a good parody of a poem.

You should rename this poem "Copy and Paste".

G. Ken's picture

Who broke your heart, Robby? I swear to god, I'll kill them. With a knife. You seem to be a guy who prefers knives, aren't you? "Guns for show, knives for pro" kind of credo you live by, am I right? I know I'm right.

Well, the title is appropriate, since I seemed to have kept missing the friggin point to this thing, other than, as I already said, you're realising that this person is not the same as they once were. And thus, everything in your world changes because of it - even inanimate objects like rooms. Does the weather blow differently? Do birds chirp out of harmony?

Maybe you should title this "The same", because that's what every line is. You started off looking like you were going somewhere good, and then it became very redundant very quickly. Perhaps you are a fan of redundancy, are you Rob?

Well, you let me know about the murder offer. Or I can call. Lemme know when the best time to catch you between 49 lines of "the same the same oh tell me it's the same the same same the let me know same the same" would be.