Alone

Living life alone

bleeding on my own.

I don't want your help

leave me by myself.

All you do is cause me pain

leaving me yet with nothign to gain.

I do not actually live alone

I have my friends.

They usually know nothing

and can help me not.

Still yet I feel alone

alone and stranded.

Living life alone and

bleeding on my own.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

July 25,2004

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Travis Scott's picture

I really enjoyed this poem. Actually, I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I would appreciate it if you would read my poems and give me some advice.

Leland Orten's picture

wow this is an extremely passionate piece of poetry i really hope that this is not how you really feel but if it is i am here to help you through this time

Ross's picture

i really like this one i can identify alot to it

Alli of the cheese's picture

Woah! Your poem is really good! I like it almost as much as I like cheese!!!! Still followed by the word yet is not proper grammer darn you... but other then that it rawks! Morbid and depressing just how I like it!

Jonathan Estep's picture

I really like it...It says how i feel quite often...