my mothers last moments

No noise, just silence

While we all watch your final moments

We are all standing around you

Dressed in all black

We drop roses on your coffin

One from your daughter

One from your mother

One from your sister and more

And I, rest my hands on yours

Kisses your forehead

And promises to never forget you

"I love you mommy!!!!"

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem when i was thinkin about me and my mom before she died.

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and she still love you

and she still love you too....you yomg there is work to do but you have a sensitive soul and this will help u a lot, in finding the words ....and make u life misery, i often wish to ba a hard cow, be sensitive is like being a open wound to the wold to pick on.

bless u, herve/margot


Visual poet/ Libertine lost in a labyrinth of complexities, methaphors, searching for the essence/ Ink of life/ death to spell my syphilistic words on the page/ screen.       

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yeah. thanx. your a very good

yeah. thanx. your a very good poem writer. my sensitivity helps me alot. It sometimes over power me. but it is something i cant help.