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moon alignment (planet cracked) I crossed my heart with no intentions to die but if i must then it would be just.
My heads been rolling around like a wagon wheel.
These hands feel the paper,
These hands know what lives in every blank page.
If I fail under a new light then strike me down with one shot.
Picked up a pen drew what ever my hands could see,
Saw something less distressing for the first time in months.
Apologized for my wrong words
Confessed I had less control over my dirt mouth then I did over the rain.
Haven't herd a word since you said
You didn't notice I spat out something thoughtless..
Its been killing me ever since.
I feel like I haven't read
I feel like I haven't read your stuff in forever but its still... Not the same but almost comfortable to read. I know I am weird sorry hun. I really like this piece though.
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Well I would hope its not the
Well I would hope its not the same I would hope my writings matured over the years but I am happy you still enjoy my madness! :P
"Demons run when a good man goes to war. Nights will fall and drown the sun when a good man goes to war."
thoughtless
Everyone has had a "Freudian slip" at times and regret later saying it. Well written piece. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Great write!
"You didn't notice I spat out something thoughtless..
Its been killing me ever since." so often, we find ourselves with someone who simply cannot see the part of of us where our soul struggles to exist.
There you go again twisting
There you go again twisting my brain up in beautiful knots!!! man you are such a writer! You need to start getting that structure rolling so that the exact intention behind the work really shines! I love that last line! sheer brilliance! Bravo!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ssmoothie said your poetry
Ssmoothie said your poetry was something else... I see why! You really held me caught in your words. That was simply indescribably good!!! I can't wait to read more! ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Thank you
I always enjoy seeing that people enjoy my work! :D
"Demons run when a good man goes to war. Nights will fall and drown the sun when a good man goes to war."
See!
I told you! something incredible yet undefinable about his works... it just leaves me..??? I don't know exactly but I like it, I like it ALOT! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."