barefooted at the gate

 

O lofty verse, you climb the tower,  

brick by brick of gilded diction,  

a Babel of syllables reaching skyward,  

yet trembling beneath your own ambition.  

 

You call yourself magnum opus—  

but the echo rings magnum pompous,  

a parade of words in velvet robes,  

forgetting the barefoot truth at the gate.  

 

Still, in your swollen pride,  

a quiet break appears:  

a hidden rhyme of yielding,  

strength revealed in its fracture.  

 

So let the pomp collapse into dust,  

let the tower scatter into tongues,  

and may the gathering remain—  

not in grandeur, but in grace.

 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

 a bit of self examination 

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I too

I too love this poem. In fact, I have enjoyed each of your works that I've read so far. 


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Many, many thanks, dear

Many, many thanks, dear Jesster. I'm only too appreciative that you let me know. This has surely made my day Smile


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I love this poem, especially

I love this poem, especially its title.


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Thank you kindly. It was an

Thank you kindly. It was an allusion to the burning bush invite where footwear was taken off in reverence. Much appreciated Smile


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