drink the hemlock

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at first the words

were stone in my mouth

silent, heavy, unyielding

 

you pressed a coin

into my palm—

thirty for betrayal,

or thirty for truth?

 

now the choice burns:

to open my eyes

and let the imperfect syllables fall,

or to seal them shut

and sip the bitter draught

that keeps the poem flawless

but forever unborn

 

better, perhaps,

to stumble in speech

than to die with silence

curled like a serpent

around the tongue

 
 
 
 
 
 
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karlmcallister's picture

Nice!

Touché mon amie! Well done!

redbrick's picture

I was hoping you would relish

I was hoping you would relish “la petite répartie.” Smile


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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

Your use of metaphor, simile,

Your use of metaphor, simile, and symbolism is always dynamically effective!  Always!


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Thank you J-Called. 

Thank you J-Called. Smile


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