Seventeen Words
Autumn leaves scatter,
a bearded man bends to paper,
midnight train departs,
dreams dissolve,
winter silence gathers.
Author's Notes/Comments:
...instead of 17-syllables. An extension.
Autumn train departs—
fallen leaves scatter like words,
wind carries regret.
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Excellent in both versions.
Excellent in both versions.
Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]
Many thanks, Starward-Led.
Many thanks, Starward-Led. Means a whole lot here.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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