"our poetic sides"

 

 

"Our Poetic Sides"

 

 

I press publish at midnight—
a fractal of gum blossom
pushed through glowing screens.

 

Your reply unfurls
like dawn’s first tide,
colouring my verse in sunrise.

 

Between hyperlinked galaxies
we exchange essences,
postcards of feeling
with no postage due.

 

Each notification
a pulse in our shared bloodstream,
morphemed gondolas flowing beneath
our eager fingertips.

 

In that feedback loop
hesitant stanzas root
in the quiet soil of another’s heart.

 

Our poetic sides converge,
constellations woven
into the net’s soft gravity.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

I am as enchanted by this

I am as enchanted by this poem in the same way as the first poems I ever read during my adolescence.  I have kept it open in my browser since mid-morning (and it is now 1:18pm EST).  One of the compensations with which my old age and declining health have been blessed is to have been able to see this great outpouring of your Poetry and, especially, this particular Poem.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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May we be allowed a continued

May we be allowed a continued outpouring from all corners as we suckle upon the essence of Eternity.


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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

This poem is not only very,

This poem is not only very, very great, it also makes me wish I could have met you in person.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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So kind of you to say so.

So kind of you to say so. Meanwhile, we have so much poetry to meet on!


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver