out from under

 

 

Sprawling, Yes, But Not Forgotten

(after Eliot, out from under)


I have prepared so many faces

I forget which one belonged to joy.

Some I stitched from sitcom cadences,

some were pressed from grayscale saints

 

who never blushed or broke or told their mothers.

There will be time to unbutton the metaphor—

but not today. Today I pass.

I pass like wind through a hallway

 

where even the mirrors look away politely.

No, I am not Prince Hamlet—

too many soliloquies, too few exits.

I am the one adjusting the lighting

 

so no one can see how my vowels linger

on the edges of other names.

Yes, I am “formulated”— pinned, as they said.

Not butterfly, not beetle— but question.

 

Wings folded up before they could be called flamboyant.

I am not the tragedy, just the body

that carried it quietly through customs.

Even now I hesitate at doorways

 

long enough to be renamed hesitation.

Still— some days, the fog lifts.

Some days, I walk into a room and forget to shrink.

That’s when the mermaids start to sing.

 

 

 

 

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That is very shrewdly

Sorry, meant to post a reply.


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I too do that sometimes....

I too do that sometimes.... it's probably the way the site is designed, like the save button right next to the delete button, there's always a 50-50 chance either way!


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Eliot was the first Modernist

Eliot was the first Modernist Poet I studied during the Seventies.  You have written an excellent response to Prufrock.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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If dead poets spoke what a

If dead poets spoke what a conversation loop that would be! 

Now we deal in hypotheticals, imaginative conceptualisations, and fanfiction type stuff.


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That is very shrewdly

That is very shrewdly correct!


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Which is why I try before I

Which is why I try before I could no longer....


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

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