obstinately desired

Folder: 
reworked vintage

 

We inhabit separate orbits,
           axes turning,
gravity pulling us apart. 
I search for a tether, invisible,
 
woven out of your laughter,
our half-glances stitching intimacy 
into the space between breaths. 
I carry this treasure, sealed
 
between us— a reservoir
of pulse and promise 
throbbing in my chest,
guarded against doubt. 

Even those closest to you 
cannot taste the flame
I tend, this persistent heat 
that grows stronger in absence. 

                                  We need space— 
time’s quiet chambers to root and unfurl,
even when distance stretches 
its pale fingers across our days. 

In those gaps of not-being-together,
I fill the silence with you: 
your warmth a steady ember,
an unyielding ache that insists 
on our return to each other. 




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Author's Notes/Comments: 

...a bit of a reworking of an older piece, 'obstinate desire.'

Link: https://postpoems.org/authors/crypticbard/poem/1108755 

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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

Thank you for saying so.

Thank you for saying so.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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I read somewhere that this

I read somewhere that this planet hosts several thousand documentable languages.  If I knew them all, I still would not have sufficient words to praise the verbal artistry of your Poetry.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Dear StarSpared, that's such

Dear StarSpared, that's such a generous and beautifully phrased comment. It carries the kind of warmth that could light up a library!

To imagine all the world’s tongues gathered and still coming up short in praise… that’s poetry in itself.

I’ll take it as a quiet reminder that expression isn't just about vocabulary:it’s about resonance, rhythm, and emotional truth.

And if this poem spoke to you in that way, then it has done more than words alone could ever manage.

Thank you. Your response is a poem in disguise.


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