soul of time

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The tides still reach though hands grow thin, 
Oars lie quiet where once they'd been. 
From spade to sail, from heart to shore, 
A song remains, but boats no more.

 

Beneath the hearth where old tongues weave,

A tale is born in ember’s sleeve.

The voices rise, the echoes call,

In fireside lore and shadowed hall.

 

A bard’s bright words, a poet’s strain,

Still whisper through the lashing rain.

Let not their song fade, nor their rhyme—

For stories guard the soul of time.

 

 

 

 

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(Yes, I am trying another

(Yes, I am trying another one.)  Your verbal dexterity and skill as a tale-weaver really, really, really commands my respect.  This one is a centerpiece of your entire Poetry.  It is textbook perfect and deserves to be in every quotation book.  It reminds me of a remark Ezra Pound wrote in a letter after T. S, Eliot published The Waste Land in 1922:  "About enough to make the rest of us close up shop."  That remark definitely applies to this poem, also!


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Your most valued words come

Your most valued words come at a very good time as a dark season has sojoirned upon the arid poetic land. Many, many thanks


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