Her Best Friend

Man took upon himself with eyes
The stone figure so full of lies
It's Beauty so! it reached the edge
It's beauty so! Man took with pledge

Bolted horror in mirrored sin
Stone statue was man again!
Had lies felt right! had yet fell short!
Swooped down in sin with angel's court

She held beauty as if, her own
As if 'twas beauty set in stone
She wrapped around bursting regret
Until moon shown and sun had set

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It is always annoying to see a sad person cry. Especially when you don't know him

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

Favorite Lines.

"She held beauty as if, her own
As if 'twas beauty set in stone"

You inspired a piece out of me from your comments note.
"Licking Salt."
I read all of your writings tonight.
Very excellent.
Please keep it up.
^.-


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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You made me smile just a tad

I appreciate that you liked it. People don't give me good things, especially liking the things I make. I really don't know how to react to it. It made me feel sad a bit after the smile. But thank you :)


Well perhaps women are better at waiting for love than men.

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A tad? awwwwwe man T.T

Whether or not that people like those things..
I'm very pleased to say that I do.
In your hand you held a bunch of jumbled letters.
Nothing interesting about that,
but it's what you created when you threw all those mismatched pieces in the air to form the words that you needed or wanted to say.
The beauty is held within the lines.
I was reading between and just know that I love your work.
Also...sometimes other people might not know how to react to the creations you form, but the beauty about it is that their reading.
A thousand scanning eyes devouring your words.
I know this because I was one of 'em.
Thank you for sharing. ^_-


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo