So Tempting

Vodka as clear as water.

It is a necessity.



What else could wash these down?

One by one.



Red is my favourite colour.



How many will I need?

I lined up seventy-three.



Down I go.

One by one.



Is it too late to tell you,

“I told you so”?



I have everything

Going for me.

Good luck

Trying to figure this one out.

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I like this poem. It sounds to me like it's about speed pills, but I could be totally wrong. However, I get the impression that you are giving reference to some type of pills as though you were going to swallow them with the vodka or something. I enjoy poems like these with a bit of mystery to them. To me, the poem is quite creative and very clever.

Also, I couldn't help but notice in your photo how much you resemble my girlfriend. I have an eye for true beauty, I guess,...especially when it's that obvious.

Thaks for posting, I really enjoyed this.

new_wave_franky
July 10, 2009.