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no love

reality spent with her
dreams spent with you
im tryin to decypher
the realer of the two
loves held in your hands
pleasures kept in hers
nostalgia is kept in my hands
a tremble accents my words
better to have loved and lost
better to have lost ur love
id go back at all costs
for another chance is what i wish to clutch
why am i stuck on to you
like a fish on a hook
i see us from the bad point of view
and can read you like a book
lost without ur attendance
my vitality is drained, im turning blue
wish i could find a form of repentance
so i could go back to loving you

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This is incredible!!! I love

This is incredible!!! I love this! so much of whats in my head sometimes and i am sure many others. Now is all we have to dealwith and the future is all we can try to shape... Excellent write! well done! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thank you ssmoothie sorry it

thank you ssmoothie sorry it took so long to get back to you. im glad someone else feels my pain, although that may not be a good thing. i cant help but feel nastalgic and i feel retarded for it. letting go is soooooooo hard

SSmoothie's picture

Who said you have to let go?

Who said you have to let go? Keep it all with you. It only makes you stronger, a life without regrets is no life at all! Gotta crash and burn so you know the difference between great an mediocrity! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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i dont wanna entirely let go

i dont wanna entirely let go but i cant help but think about her everyday. shes like a haunting curse that i cant get rid of.

SSmoothie's picture

Where are you? I'm here

Where are you? I'm here waiting for you! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."