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For the Taking
When I first saw her,
She took my breath away.
She smiled at me,
And left me speechless.
When I last saw her,
She took my child away.
She smiled at me,
And left me homeless.
When I first saw her,
She took my breath away.
She smiled at me,
And left me speechless.
When I last saw her,
She took my child away.
She smiled at me,
And left me homeless.
Oooh, brutal and to the point.I Like how both stanzas are so alike and yet each with a very different meaning.Short and forth right excellent.Your poems certainly don"t pull any punches and your take on life is pretty hard assed to say the least.Enjoyed your portfolio a lot. Cheers.