"baby blue"

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Death Poems

"baby blue"

i remember the day

when u had something

so important to say

you said u were pregnant

i said ok

i'll take responsibility

for are fertility

i'll provide the facility

we have the ability

but then u made a descion

that was not my vision

are minds had a collision

you decided to have an abortion

no adoption just contortion

i lost my good fortune

the riches i had lost to abortion

i was sad, so tore up

i remember for a week i threw up

so u went and got your check up

took care of business, got all cut up

then you came by and said whats up

like i would be fine with it all

but that why i left u a note

haning on the wall

in the back hall

i couldn't dare face you

i know its what u had to do

and it was just as hard on u

but i had a kid, but that u blew

i could have taken the baby from u

gave it a life thats new

but now i must conclude

that i'm not trying to be rude

i'm stuck in minds solitude

i'm all baby blue

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*~* Slendah*~*'s picture

It's really interesting to hear about abortion from the male perspective.

volleybabe's picture

wow... your poetry is great and I really liked this one. the emotion presented in this one really got to me. the feelin you gave off of pain and helplessness really has an effect of the reader... excellent poem

jgupta's picture

A feeling of despair and powerlessness. As I keep sailing through your poetry, keep discovering little notes on society.