Living on Something Dead

If I could make your sins mine,

Would you still seek compassion?

If I was his friend

When he was mine

But only because I had none

Could he have been saved at all?

If he had reached out

To the victim of something

That I was

Could he have understood?

If I was touched by something else

Would touch remember the death?

Innocence shed

When the blood that would have come

Has been absorbed into a swollen heart

Arrogant with feeling

And caught up with everything but logic.

From one end of the park to the other

Through old trees

That try to resemble peace

Without inflicting the cruelty of suburbs

Were white people live

Indifferent to the pain of a ghetto

Some would say is made of minorities.

Some would call empires

The home of emperors

This empire crowns an emperor

As the Queen of England

Rests with nothing assured

In this easy life of hers.

In this easy life of mine

Dynasties of thought breed into each other

What I held dear yesterday

Has slowly melted into my plans for survival.

The morals I remember

Aren’t holding up to spines anymore.

What was so fresh

Is curdling into something

That just might make me

Who I will be

When the death allows life.

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