You Make Me Love To Hate You

Rewrite of Kiss' song You Love Me To Hate You

 

I can no longer tell any lies

When it comes to

What you do to me

I just can't stand even a smile

The vile just rolls right your way

Every single day

I get caught in a web

Any fool should be able to see

Any fool it seems but me

But damn every time

I see you

Down my street

Puttin' your candy on display

We start to play

 

A game of who can ignore who the best

Who's gonna come out on top?

Me or you

Pleasure or  pain

Which is the true name of our game? 

Forever enemies

For never friends

How its all gonna end?

When this life is through

 

Boy, I'll still wanna watch you cry

Be there to help you die

Boy, I like it best when bleed

Feds the thrill of my sickest need

Wishing to Hell

You would hurry up

And get dead  

 

Cause you make me love to hate you

Yeah, you know

You make me love to hate you

Boy, you make me love to hate you

And the more that I hate you

The more I think sometimes I'd kinda like maybe

Just maybe to even date you

 

You make me feel like a bitch cat

In heat on a hot tin roof

All I wanna do is scratch and bite

Strangle your black heart

In my favorite hangman's noose

I wanna pull the rope

Make it all nice and tight

So you can't escape

Twisted love

Sick obsession

It's a chain

Weighting me

Eternal to you

You're the lock and baby, I'm the key

No matter how much I protest

I don't wanna be

I just can't seem to walk

Trapped in our neverending fantasy

 

Chorus

 

A game of who can ignore who the best

Who's gonna come out on top?

Me or you

Pleasure or pain

Which is the true name of our game?

Forever enemies

For never friends

How its all gonna end?

When this life is through

 

Chorus

 

And the more you make me love to hate you

Oh yeah the more you make me love to hate you

The more I think maybe

Just maybe

I might be falling in love with you

 

2013 Ramona Thompson 

 

 

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Thanks Silver. Great idea.

Thanks Silver. Great idea. Never done spoken word  before. lol I'd be so nervous

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feedback?

I think this could also do really well as spoken word. perhaps take it to an open mic and smooth it out a little bit. get it feeling as natural as conversation. 


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