Forever Etched

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Broken shackles tear at my feet

this pain is overwhelming me

Your like a memory of death

pain and loss theres nothing left



Scars will sear my skin for years

Hiding my face from these scathing mirrors

Shall the beast devour me I do not know

Here within the void I lay down low



intricate details slither through my mind

the very wish of my soul is to let me rewind

or let me forget, let me let go

take all this sadness and free my soul



In treachery Is where I am doomed to be

I swear it is etched in my eternity

Like demons dancing merrily across my mind

I will remember your face till the end of time

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Afzal Shauq's picture

a great and love touching poem indeed... i went through few of poems too and got the idea that you are a good poet...with rich ideas... i am also a poet know as peace wisher... hope you go through my work too..

raminastar's picture

I am glad you liked It. I

I am glad you liked It. I shall come over and take a look at yours :) I have been trying to catch up. I was not on for a quite a while and I am just seeing some of these comments. Thank you.