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a small amount of potential

i used to be so alive

the brightness was blinding

then i tried to feel but there was nothing there

nothing there

vacant

lost

expressionless

this can't be much more empty

what's left is

what i can't attain

i have to remember to forget

you

why does it turn out like this

i don't want to wake up

and know that the day is going to be sunny

and know that it hasn't changed since yesterday

and know

i haven't forgotten you

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©29 July 2003 - 7:56pm — raina_3
31 July 2003 - 11:12pm — Marianne Chrisos (not verified)
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and know
i haven't forgotten you

very nice. speaks to me. much like things spelled incorrectly, except better. :-)

30 July 2003 - 3:27pm — Josh Glasgow (not verified)
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i don't want to wake up
and know that the day is going to be sunny
and know that it hasn't changed since yesterday

what's left is
what i can't attain
i have to remember to forget
you
why does it turn out like this

Being alone sucks. It's.. god, incredibly hard. This is such a beautiful poem. You're a great poet. Lord. Kontinue writing, please. I enjoy reading these.
Wonderfantasticool.

30 July 2003 - 4:59am — Đęąđ Рœţ (not verified)
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hmmm...that reminds me of something....deja vu lol nice poem *nods*