caffeine

things are not as simple as they seem.



i know i'm jumping into suicide



half of me doesn't care



i couldn't look away from your self-inflicted, dazed helplessness



even though i just got rid of the last shard of glass left behind for me to hold to



a whole new set of scars



starting with that mindless embrace



and unconscious rambling about



me and



you and



pills and



sleepless nights

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oh_so_odd's picture

So they've pretty much said it all, but this is an amazing poem. you do a good job

Josh Glasgow's picture

i know i'm jumping into suicide

and unconscious rambling about
me and
you and
pills and
sleepless nights

I'm glad you've written. Nobody else has. Nothing good anyway. I miss good poetry. Everything after "tha blunt" was a haze. Thank you, though. You did pretty dang well.

Marianne Chrisos's picture

i know i'm jumping into suicide

a whole new set of scars
starting with that mindless embrace

very nice. best in awhile :-D