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I shall swim inside

stroking until waves turn white

overtaking me

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 1:26am
©4 May 2004 - 6:40pm — raila
20 May 2004 - 2:45pm — ultimprv
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Glad to see you are writing again brother
missed the likes of you

btw - great write
MMMMmmm, yes... feeling it

Much Respect, One Love
One

17 May 2004 - 4:54pm — Donielle Johnson (not verified)
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It is so great to read your vivid haikus again...Oh how I have missed them. You have inspired me to write some more myself.

4 May 2004 - 7:21pm — Katherine Neitz (not verified)
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One word is all that I have to say. Beautiful.

4 May 2004 - 6:42pm — Tawanda Roberson (not verified)
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OK!!!! THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT. I AM LOVING THIS!