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My dear My Dear
My Dear My Dear why musent you be near,you are so far I'm getting sick I need a cure. I only fear what could happen when I'm not whispering sweet things in your ear, your voice is a comfort and is all I need to hear my dear my dear I just want you here.
very nice
and I am not trying to be critical, "musent" is it "mustn't? If it were "why the muse sent you to be there" that would be poetics
anyway, it is the the thought that counts and the thought of missing your lover has an essence filled with universal appeal.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
critical i think not...
There is a difference between constructive criticism and criticism and to be honest i had no idea if that was a word... it went with the flow and i say what i mean when i miss my love. Thank you so much for your help its much appreciated :)