Tennessee Summers

Humid Tennessee forests

In the green, green summer

Filled with bugs and roots and boulders

And the feeling of profound

Quiet loneliness

in the din

Of birds and the soft wind

Which makes fat, wet leaves

Shake their dew on my head

 

And freedom

 

At night, the stars prick

Through the dense

Leaféd canopy

Like silver needle points

Through the cloth of

The indigo-black sky

And the Milky Way

Like a shimmering pennant 

Way up high

Caught, unfurling, in a cosmic breeze

 

Is it foolish that I know 

Scientifically

What all of this is

But in my heart

I don't know what it is

At all

 

I have nothing but questions

when I get like this

 

Somehow it is all

connected,

To me.

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This is an excellent poem,

This is an excellent poem, and the final stanza is very, very accurate.  Your body contains atoms that were ejaculated into deep space after being fused in their cores, so there is an innate sense, in your flesh, of being part of the Cosmos.  I believe Poets have the task of explaining the Cosmos to itself; and this poem definitely participates in that process.  


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]