Torn Love

I got mad, upset; I thought you were angry at me,

You were busy so I told a friend,

I didnt know what to do, who to tell,

Crying as I was typing.

You sent me a text message,

I replied and got another message back,

I cried again and sent another,

Still no reply.

As I lay in a hot steamy bath,

Condensation ran down the walls,

Simultaneous to the tears down my cheeks,

I hoped you would phone, you didnt.

Im sorry if I upset you,

Im sorry if I made you angry,

Im hurting, needed to talk to you

You didnt phone, I cried myself to sleep.

Lying in bed all curled up,

Thinking of you, and if Ive done something,

Listening to the same song on repeat,

It reminds me of you, how much I care and love you.

Im still here hurting, needing to talk to you,

Knowing it wont happen tonight,

Lying here alone waiting for you,

Waiting for a message, a call, nothing came, just tears.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

hmmm like it very much... inspiring a's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...