Blue-Collar Poetry

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LITTLE THINGS

 

By the end of my shift

Alls I wanna do, yall, is

Crack open a couple-a

Cold ones and get drunk,

So pardon poor quality.


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Short, unvarnished, and wry;

Short, unvarnished, and wry; much like a quick word shared between coworkers at the end of a grueling shift.

It distills a working-class voice down to its bluntest truth: “Alls I wanna do... is / Crack open a couple-a / Cold ones.”

The poetic speaker owns their exhaustion and doesn’t dress it up. In fact, the closing line: “So pardon poor quality”

is a cheeky nod to the poem’s own rough edges, as if the poem apologizes for being a poem at all; that’s where the power lives.

This poem doesn't strive for perfection; it leans into the sweat, the slang, and the syntax of the shift floor.

It says, “Here I am, tired and tipsy, and this is still art.” There’s a subtle defiance in that simplicity.

The poetic speaker may be too beat down to wax lyrical, but the act of writing (even poorly) is a kind of claim to space, to voice, to survival.

Labourers of the world, Unite!

 


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Wow, if someone told me I

Wow, if someone told me I would receive a comment at all on this little widget, let alone one as utterly spectacular as that, I wouldn't have believed it. But wow, thank you, that was a very nice way to begin this expectant night of no-sleep. Perhaps we can see how long our patterned chat may last, like last time?


peace, pot, tequila shot

Jesus loves us, stoned or not

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That was fun! Yes, we should

That was fun! Yes, we should do that again


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However my first fear would

However my first fear would be that I couldn't keep up, due to the vast gap I have of intellectual inferiority in comparing where we stand on the food-chain, and thereby either foolishly embarress myself like usual or reluctantly cower under the recognition of my surfaced stupidity. That being said, I suppose as a concept to conquer these qualms I can consider myself a student of sorts. The choice is yours.


peace, pot, tequila shot

Jesus loves us, stoned or not

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Everything is not about

Everything is not about intellect but probably more about heart and passion in fusion with smarts of sorts


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