Return of the hermit

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The literal insanity of he who hides,

Thoughts twisted like a thorny vine

Strangling the fragrant sage bush-

Iā€™d like to think we all suffer the same

Martyrdom of our blemished brains.

 

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Plummeting torment is

Plummeting torment is depicted, with striking skill, in this concise trapdoor of the mind.

 

I'm particularly intrigued by the significance of the third line. Sage has powerful connections to metaphysics and healing, so the juxtaposition of the word "strangling" is startling and ominous.

 

Some serious chills. Brilliant!