THE SPIRITED RENEE'

My life was passing

with no where to go.

Four blank walls,

friends a no-show.



I ventured the internet

and randomly chose

a site with poetry

sprinkled with prose.



Postpoems was the place

with an open door.

Scanning the list,

I saw the name "Hawksquaw."



I entered her hall...





Her bio exposed

a certain air

from Avon Lady

to a machine shop fare.



Immersed and absorbed

into her words of script.

Words from her soul

through her spirit's quip.



Read me! Read me!

Critique me if you dare.

I appreciate your opinions

of my volumes posted here.



My spirit goes out

to a gal named  Renee'

for showing me a way

to create again.




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Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

WELL said,great poem,you're on a roll,can't keep up lol L&P

taffy's picture

Hello Again, Yes so many of us will relate to this poem, and you put it so well. Thanks for sharing.I am enjoying your page. Best always, David.L.