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Carefull Conflicts
Tranquility and harmony negates greed and lust.
Lack of love is lonliness.
Sincerity died...
promises broken...
lies all.
Feelings of empathy evolves...
no one cares.
Betrayal without knowledge
lacks trust.
Return to past impossible.
Miles separate two who love.
Necessity to contact...
place unknown.
Determinate means to find.
The strummer will never wander...
absolute void has been met.
A new life has compensated...
share a must.
Insecurities frightening...
one with scars cannot be blamed.
Discipline with self...
patience destined.
Nightmares replaced by pleasantries.
Questions answered...
united as one.
Oh you called and I didn't know it or my loving heart would show it You touched me deeply down inside Would you like to be my pride? The Carefull Conflicts we can create filled with Tranquility and harmony negates greed but lust shall stay and grow stronger day by day. Yes Lack of love is lonliness. Sincerity died... promises broken... lies all. Feelings of empathy evolves... no one cares. Betrayal without knowledge lacks trust. Return to past impossible. Miles seperate two who love. Necessity to contact... place unknown. Determinate means to find. The strummer will never wander... absolute void has been met. A new life has compensated... share a must. Insecurities frightening... one with scars cannot be blamed. Discipline with self... patience destined. Nighmares replaced by pleasantries. Questions answered... united as one. HOW GREAT YOUR WORDS MY LOVELY ONE To share with you the thougts above I would gladly show my love to all who wish to see what lies inside of me I only wish you were FREE FREE FREE FREE. Leave your number and I will call. And we'll start a gentle fall. Bill Are you a riddle locked into a mystery. Sometimes your poetry seems to be?
I love the way you've justified the text here, and the message of putting on plesantries when everything beneath the surface isnt so smooth and charming. This is a very true observation that I think a lot of regular people (poets arent regular people LOL) don't recognize in themselves. Nice work and thanks for critiquing my stuff too. You know, I'm a staff member of that postpoems message board, the link is around here somewhere, get a lot of action and share a lot of jokes and stuff over there, come by and play sometime if you're feeling up to it :) Melisande