Alas, Apathy In Me

Peering into the mist

reality overshadows

         at times.

Haze rising above the surface

       dims the pathway.



Mind is plagued by the misdeeds

          of others.

Heart burdened from all the

        incurable maladies.

An area unspoken by many.



Henceforth, open my heart and mind...

this is where I belong.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I didn't realize I was being apathetic at first.
Here it is. I quess we all need to see it in us from time to time.

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salphire5's picture

Linda,
Sometimes it is hard to get out of that apathetic rut isn't it? Half the battle is realizing that you are actually in it, hazy as it is.
Well expressed Linda. I enjoyed reading your poem. Now for me to get cracking!
ps (Did you mean to write 'plaqued', or 'plagued?')
F.M. Salphire

Toni Cox's picture

dear linda: i am shocked at ur ability to make me laugh and smile. i thought u probably were a dictionry or a book or a vocabualary writng a poem on its own. they are great. please please write more for me to critique love Toni xxx