A Novice Attempt

When we're together

I feel in my

      heart



The warm sincerity

that'll never  part



A sense of joy

Beauty's way



To reign forever

in all we say



Life is what we make of it

and how we feel



To spend it as one

is a dream for real



Travel if must in

order to succeed



Happiness with you

my only need.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Beginnings of thoughts on paper

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Kevin Cameron's picture

hehe, I like this. So lovey-dovey ^_^

David Harris's picture

There's a lot of completeness in your beginning thoughts. This is lovely in its simplicity.

James Haggerty's picture

And the might oak tree starts with a tiny little acorn.

The Hook's picture

Touching, and inspiring.....I enjoyed this one, and its simplicity of emotion....also thought it flowed nicely!!

missmichelle's picture

That was beautiful. Maybe one day I'll be able to write like that.

hawksquaw99's picture

this was beautiful....