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If I was to call you, would you be able to tell me who it is that I am?

If you call me would I be able to tell you what you are?

If we both called each other,

Do you think we would be able to tell each other who we are?

 

If the sky stopped moving for a second...

Only if it stopped moving for a second,

where would we be without a second?

 

I am dialing your phone from my phone,

The number that which extends over long and short-distance.

 

I am calling your home,

Can you abort the passport to import the feeling of letting another dude in?

 

I feel like I'm swimming in a pool of my sins, 

My skin is thin,

I am throwing away the remains of what remain of me...

 

I am calling, can you answer?

It is me the one who you called the one.

 

I have a question to ask....

 

If I was to call you, would you be able to tell me who it is that I am?

If you call me would I be able to tell you what you are?

If we both called each other...

Do you think we would be able to tell each other who we are?

 

(who ARE WE?)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

(I ask myself this question when I first started dating but I didn't know where love would take us.) 

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last updated 12 March 2014 - 3:12am
©11 March 2014 - 3:20am — Prince1995
11 March 2014 - 4:05am — Morningglory
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Well, those are interesting

Well, those are interesting questions. I don't know if another person can tell a person who they are. Well, they can, but I doubt they'd be completely accurate. Another can only give an observation. And on the other end... would you be able to tell what they are.. surely there would be some human answer to the question. But you might be able to tell they are a spirit. Only perspectives could be told to one another. Hmm... enjoyed the read.

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11 March 2014 - 4:27am — Prince1995
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Thank-you

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I made it in a way that which I am questioning my current girlfriend about what do we call ourselves and if we was to break up. Would she let another guy use his passport to Import inside of her. 

11 March 2014 - 3:10pm — Morningglory
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FYI, the line that starts "If

FYI, the line that starts "If the sky stopped moving for a second... " gets cut off by the facebook symbol. You might want to put the rest of the sentence on the next line so we can read what that line really says.

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12 March 2014 - 3:11am — Prince1995
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ok, thank you and I will

ok, thank you and I will