The Way You Make Me Feel

The way you make me feel,

is unbelievable.

Sometimes I wonder,

if this is really true.

Could this be?

The way you make me feel,

amazes me every moment.

I want to run wild in the rain,

spin in circles till I'm dizzy,

and laugh so hard I cry.

Cuz that's how I feel,

when I talk to you.

And I never want that,

to go away.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 1-5-04. :-)

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Gary Mills's picture

You are probably one of the most pure souls I have ever read. I mean this in the kindest way. In 20 years you are going to want to look back over your stuff and you will be amazed. Never lose the ability to lay your emotions down and look at them. You do this better than people 5 times your age. YOU ARE BETTER than you could ever believe at this thing we call writing.

stay safe