Is There Anybody Out There?

Is there anybody out there?

Can anyone hear me?

Am I invisible to you?

I feel so alone.

Is there anybody out there?

Does anybody care?

Why do I feel this way?

Why do I cry like this?

Why don’t I care anymore?

I can’t take it,

it’s too much.

I can’t fix,

what I don’t understand.

Is there anybody out there,

who can help me?



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 10-23-02.

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Ann-Marie R's picture

I can really relate to this piece in many different ways. I look forward to reading more of you poems.

Shylah's picture

Simple yet easy to relate too. Basic feeling every human has felt at some time in their life. I feel you. Good Job

Sandra Stahl's picture

If you need someone to write to on occasion, who will listen, please email me. I have to admit I don't get to my email on a daily basis, but this poem sounds like you need to talk, and I don't know if I have any answers, but this person 'out there' does care

Leah Broomfield's picture

I can totally relate to your poem. I have been there. You should read some on mine. Thank you so much for sharing your words with me. I hope you have a wonderful and fulfilling day.
Leah

Marianne Good's picture

Hello! Your poem tells how it is to feel alot of loneliness.I hope you have love,care and happiness in your life now.All the very best to you.Take good care,Marianne

Corey Fox's picture

i like! it is a good and relevant poem. Many can feel these same sentiments and it is not nice to feel that way. Please check out my stuff. Also i have 3 books available through bn.com/amazon.com under the name Corey Evan Fox

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Randy Allmon's picture

i know where your coming from in this poem, keep the poems coming.