Mental Man

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2001 Poetry

I once had a doctor,

whom I called Mental Man.

His office was located,

in a hot pink van.

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Doctor Mental Man,

he checked out my brain.

And came to the conclusion,

that I was insane.

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I hear all these voices,

and he hears them too.

Doctor Mental Man,

what should I do?

~

Doctor Mental Man,

you seem like a nice fellow.

So would you like a bath tub,

full of strawberry Jell-O.

~

Doctor Mental Man,

I know you can groove.

But that's not what I meant,

when I said you should move.

~

Doctor Mental Man,

I'm crazy for you.

But what will the world do,

with another crazy person like you?



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem on 10-27-01. My best friend Sandra told me to write a poem about a Mental Man... so I did.

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Ronterro Smith's picture

Humm...very interesting...it seems as if I have a new nickname....oh yeah...and even though I didn't get the get the tub full of jello to work right the first time...now I am older and wiser...and itz time for me to try it again soon...lol...I like this poem...itz a nice change of things when you let your sense of humor come to the surface...keep up the good work

Bruce Pickett's picture

good work. this is another funny poem of yours. I like it.

keep up the good work

Bruce