I Thought That You Should Know

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2001 Poetry

Pain and sorrow,

filled my heart.

And in my soul I felt as though,

I was being torn apart.

~

I crawled up in the corner,

and all I did was cry.

I couldn't take it anymore,

I wanted just to die.

~

I was ready to leave this world,

to leave it all behind.

But didn't know as I talked to you,

the real love I would find.

~

I felt something so special

between you and I that night.

Feelings I have felt before,

but this time felt so right.

~

You showed me how to love again.

You showed me you could care.

You told me there would be hard times,

and life just isn't fair.

~

You helped me to forget,

the pain caused in the past.

And now I know that me and you,

share a love that will forever last.

~

I know deep in my heart,

that you love me so.

And I love you too.

I just thought that you should know.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 12-28-01. It was written for a guy named Ron who I was with at the time.

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This poem says a lot to me, and I know it means a lot to you. I hope that you can alwayz look back on this poem and know that enen in the toughest of times...if you hold on just a little longer. Things will always find a way of getting better. This poem is nicely written and I love the transition from dark to light.