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Love?

No.

Lies?

Yes.

Promises?

Broken.

Misery?

Forever.

Life?

Over.

You?

Gone.

Stars?

Faded.

Sun?

Clouded.

Questions?

Unanswered.

Problems?

Unsolved.

Hurt?

Yes.

Pain?

Unbearable.

Heart?

Broken.

Death?

Eternity.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 8-14-01. It was actually an old poem.. but I revised it on that date.

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©28 December 2001 - 6:45am — hccgirl04
30 November 2003 - 4:32pm — Amy Short (not verified)
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hey, never read a poem of this style...really nice

19 January 2003 - 2:59am — Sandra Davis (not verified)
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I loved it! keep up the good work!

29 December 2001 - 6:45am — Care Bear (not verified)
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one word... whoa lol i soo relate to this!! ur writing is awesome Care

9 November 2002 - 4:43am — Thamica McCook (not verified)
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I sooooo feel like that right now and I love this I can really relate to thyis poem very good poem!
~Mica~