Golden yellow sun

flower sending smiles, brightening

the darkest day

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Corey Fox's picture

beautiful poem, but Your form is off (5-8-4)

one love Corey & co

Karyn Indursky's picture

Beautiful poem. Your last line is missing a syllable though. It's supposed to be 5. Haiku's can be tricky, but when they're complete it's worth the work.