Lost Luv

Twelve years ago I lost a luv

It happend so suddenly

In the blink of an eye

" My God ", I cried

You were my pride and joy

Mommies first little baby boy

Only ten inches and eleven and a half ounces

I wish I could have given you lil baby bounces on my knee

I want you to know

I enjoyed the time we shared

Emotionaly and mentaly speeking to you

I know you know how much I loved and wanted you


God had a better plan

He choose to keep you in his hands

Author's Notes/Comments: 

In Memory Of My First Son.......Levon
Jan. 30, 1992     He was only 16 wks gestation.......meaning I was 4 mo. pregnant

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I like this poem better than the one I read earlier. You didn't hold back. You let your tears of words run down your cheek of paper. I could see what you were saying loudly and cloudly. It was so powerful I was almost in tears. Honesty goes a long way. Keep with it. You'll find it helps not only you're writing, but the rest of your life as well.