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I Memory of my 2 Sons Twelve years ago I lost a luv
It happend so suddenly
In the blink of an eye
" My God ", I cried
You were my pride and joy
Mommies first little baby boy
Only ten inches and eleven and a half ounces
I wish I could have given you lil baby bounces on my knee
I want you to know
I enjoyed the time we shared
Emotionaly and mentaly speeking to you
I know you know how much I loved and wanted you
But
God had a better plan
He choose to keep you in his hands
I like this poem better than the one I read earlier. You didn't hold back. You let your tears of words run down your cheek of paper. I could see what you were saying loudly and cloudly. It was so powerful I was almost in tears. Honesty goes a long way. Keep with it. You'll find it helps not only you're writing, but the rest of your life as well.