When will it all end.

This is not the trend,


Is it?

My heart is sore.


When will we settel?..... the score.

My heart goes out to those poor people.

When will they be able to live in peace?

When will they have homes that are in one peice?


When? When? When?


When will they have enough food to eat?

When will they have a decient hospital, one that is not shelled out.

When will the children have green grass to play in?

When will there city look pretty?

When will they be able to sleep and not hear "arat- ta -tat- tat".

When will it all end?


When? When? When?


When we all stand together.

Thats when it all will be better.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

War ....it is such a hateful thing. why are we so gready? (america)

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Corey Fox's picture

very beautiful poem in it's words and thoughts (and answer)

one love Corey & co

Karyn Indursky's picture

Interesting into the human psyche. You really show how we all think and feel at times with a racing mind that tangles our emotions into knots. Great job.

Karyn Indursky's picture

It never ends or we'd stop growing, learning, getting smarter, gaining intelligence, engaging wisdome, etc. That doesn't mean it doesn't get overwhelming and you showed that wonderfully.