A ...

A lie

A little closer to fate we catch on to

A Word

A little more hurt; the closer we get to crying

A Tear

A little closer we want to get to dieing

A Dream

A little closer we come to Heaven

A  Hope

A wish that will never come true

A love

A object of pain, driven to be sorrow in devout ways of strong emotion

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I really like this because of how much you get accomplished in so few lines. i especially love when
you say
"A little more hurt; The closer we get to crying
A Tear"
that's really cool
that type of descriptive style is inspiring, i think it would be nice if i imply that into some of the things i write from now on MORE strongly. that's a really cool poem